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Dieselpunk-Imperiale

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The shading is pretty great but I think color contrast is a bit of an issue here.

-Between the eyes and the shoulder area the background sorta blends with the character a bit.
-Maybe make the tears more transparent? It's clear it's fluid but it looks more like blood than water.

OosoArt responds:

oh thanks for the feedback! . i´ll have it in mind on my next drawings <3 !

You've seen "Oh shit waddup?" now behold "Oh damn howzit hanging?"

Love the spirally death arm he's got there. Looks like the wind-up frame to the attack in a fighting game.

The spade shaped...throat cavern, I guess, is a neat little subtle detail. I also think the body language is great. Lancer is laughing like a self confident sh@t-lord because his buff mean girl buddy's about to kick (presumably) your ass.

Great work but I think you're being a bit strict on yourself with a t rating. It's just a mug of beer, and she's not even actively drinking it.

Takotito responds:

hm yeah, just being cautious, and thanks!

I've got no context but I still think it's funny.

How did you do the background? Slap a filter over a still image shot of a street?

FudoMonsuta responds:

A clip studio paint asset I cropped about and fitted better. Though for some others I've applied high contrast filters over photos. Great for simple backgrounds.

Are the authors comments a friggin spongebob reference?

I love the sketchy sort of pencil trace outlines on the colored pieces. Don't know what it is but it's just charming.

Okay, I think you're onto something good here, but a few notes.

-1, Color scheme. Good but maybe switch the bars? As it stands it looks like you snapped the NewGrounds logo on the Imperial Russian Flag. It's a nice flag, but still.

-2, Should definitely keep the tank guy, but scrap everything else. Definitely the name, probably the background. Look to monarchist flags as examples, they usually have some figure on there for heraldry, be it a beast or a guy. If it's just tank guy, it looks like a symbol on an actual flag someone might fly. If it's the whole logo, then it's just that: the logo.

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