This is adorable. The rhyming most certainly helps.
This is adorable. The rhyming most certainly helps.
Thanks!
Cute.
thanks
Great but the stance seems a bit weird below the waist. Little too wide and the right (her right) foot sorta looks like it's pointing in the wrong direction. Think the expression is perfect though.
Yeah, I noticed all of this time ago, this drawing is from January hahaha thank you anyways, it's good to see some criticism :D
Shit I forgot his bro even had sideburns. Makes sense Dave should have them too.
He has them canonically even! Both he and dirk have sideburns in their sprites and talk sprites, compared to like john and jake who don't.
Usually harder to get clearly defined features in pixel art pieces, but ya did it. Think the choice in the sort of dark cyan background helps with contrast too.
Thanks, theres more pixels to come. :)
If you need some monster references, check out this old 360 game called "Blue Dragon". Has a sort of Dragon Quest aesthetic. Nice calm intro song too.
Thanks, I'll take a look!
This reminds me of the Gorillaz and the Boondocks. Double Nostalgia. The sort of dull sunset background works well too, gives everything a grunge look.
Thank you, it's nice to know i left that kind of impression. and i did happen to grow up enjoying both of those.
Rush B.
Roger that
Great but Susie seems a little smol. Feel like she should be just a hair taller?
oh wow im dumb thanks for pointing out
That is a smile I'd go to war to defend, this whole piece is precious. The texture work is great too, she actually looks like she's made of fabric patches.
I really appreciate it, thank you!
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