Sweet, but short.
Sweet, but short.
Thank you ❤️ I hope, B3 will make full version with me
Dreamy.
Quuuality! First half got me all nostalgic, sorta reminded me of the soundtrack for the Thrillville minigames. Then the second portion dropped and I was just ready to dance! Nice!
Thanks a lot!! I'm really glad you like it! :D
At first it kinda sounded like the lofi soundtrack to a haunted house, being all discordant and such but in a way that seemed planned, deliberate. Then the beat just sort of abruptly picks up in the second half and that flies out the window. I mean if you really made it in a one day time gap then you did a lot with the time you had but... I dunno. It seems all over the place? Not bad just... there's no real transition between the two halves. Least not a clean one. They kinda sound like two completely different songs.
Takes a minute for the beat to really get going but boy it does when it does. Great piece, especially as a character's theme song. The sorta distorted chorial voices at the end are a bit wacky but honestly I love em.
yah you are right :3
i change that end :3
Lovely piece really. Your friend might've not been joking when he said that, though. Music, all artforms really, are great outlets, especially for negative emotions.
For what it's worth I do hope your situation improves.
Thank you for the review and well wish! Indeed, music is a great emotional outlet.
In terms of raw quality I'd give this a 4 out of 5, but... I dunno man. Something about it just vibes with me. Hits the right frequency for me to feel good and bop along to the beat. The only specific criticism I can THINK to give is either maybe use a bit more autotuned for the vocals in the beginning OR sing with just a hair more enthusiasm as to feel a bit more chill and a bit less dead. Even then I can't say I'm sure. All in all good job!
I appreciate that!
It could use some work, yeah, specially around the midpoint onwards, but it's not BAD. Reminds me of some classic arcade and SNES games. Think you got some real potential here champ.
Thx 4 feedback.
Neat.
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