Really good, but maybe zoom in a bit?
Really good, but maybe zoom in a bit?
Bit too late for that bit yeah I should've zoomed in some more
Really good, but the action bar being animated while the petals sort of just hang there seems a bit off.
That's a fair criticism, I wanted to finish it quick and have it loop, so animating the petals wasn't a a priority. I'm glad you like it though!
Interesting design you've got going here. Notice one of the tags is, "Lapis". Would this happen to be derivative of Steven Universe? The somewhat shattered aesthetic and water motif would make sense. Great job, regardless. Only criticism is that the white border works well against the droplets but not so much against the sort of space-like background of the piece.
Thanks for the review! It's actually a character from Houseki no Kuni/Land of the Lustrous, and each part of the piece has something to do with their.... development. It's hard to explain and very spoilery. Check it out! It won an award for best CG and has a pretty unique plot.
This looks like one of the backgrounds on the LuminantAegis Streams, Love It!
Yeeey, thank you so much! <3
Beautiful, but maybe break it up into multiple pages?
Thank you! Yeah, good call.
(Left panel) aww how cut- (Right Panel) OHGOD!
she can get pretty violent can't she?
You know I was about to start typing praise for the style and the color pallet, but then I realized the overall design reminds me of the fishbowl igloo from club penguin. And now that's all I can think of. 10/10.
Thank you so much, man! Really appreciate it!
Robo-camels
Yes!
Sketch work is great but yeah dude, the hand is really throwing me off.
Yeah i didnt even realize i drew it backwards until my boyfriend mentioned it to me
Thank you btw ahah
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