Good, cute, kinda reminds me of EggMania visually, but still a little rough around the edges. All in all not bad.
Good, cute, kinda reminds me of EggMania visually, but still a little rough around the edges. All in all not bad.
I'd say that most of the folks in the crowd look like the ones who'd enjoy the calarts style, (I.E. Hipsters) visually speaking, but as far as the joke and animation itself this is top quality.
Maybe even the hipsters have had enough with calarts :P
And thanks man!
Sound effects are a bit much, but what you were able to make with papercrafts came out pretty dang fluid! And the music is neat.
"Absence of God is very accurate."
Love the animation style.
10/10 voice work and writing especially if its dorkly inspired, and I mean the early good stuff,
6/10 animations. They're okay but, eh.
All in all good job.
Ty, but I rip-off the voices from seth macfarlane cavalcade of cartoon comedy. I can’t do voice reveal yet. Maybe I can when I get 1,000 subscribers on my YouTube page!
Edit: I finally got 1,000 subscribers on my YouTube page
5 stars as far as the song goes, really sweet and soft, but animation is a bit more of a 4. The recycling of scenes does work, sort of, but it's still recycling.
All in all ya got something pretty great here, especially since it was a 1 person job.
More of a gif, really. But as far as quality goes, yeah, you did a bang-up job.
The end is a bit abrupt but the animation as a whole is rather fluid. The design is adorable, too.
The end is abrupt, you're right, because that was where my scene was supposed to end and segway into another scene- but yeah, on it's own it does cut off out of no where haha. But thank you!
Good, there's definitely potential here, but the emotion in the eyes doesn't match the voice and mouth. Even with dot eyes angry or nervous eyebrows can be the difference between good or great.
Thank you! I shall definitely keep it in mind when editing my next one.
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