The end is a bit abrupt but the animation as a whole is rather fluid. The design is adorable, too.
The end is a bit abrupt but the animation as a whole is rather fluid. The design is adorable, too.
The end is abrupt, you're right, because that was where my scene was supposed to end and segway into another scene- but yeah, on it's own it does cut off out of no where haha. But thank you!
Good, there's definitely potential here, but the emotion in the eyes doesn't match the voice and mouth. Even with dot eyes angry or nervous eyebrows can be the difference between good or great.
Thank you! I shall definitely keep it in mind when editing my next one.
Feel like his hair should be more on the reddish brown side, but the facial expressions and movement are beautifully fluid.
Oh you're right, I forgot he had brown hair. It looked dark in the interview. Thanks tho!!
The friggin Yoshi's Island kazoo at the end though.
Music in this is pretty legit.
Adorable as all heck but... the "Wah" sounds... not gonna lie they great on ya after a bit.
I love everything about this.
...So like did the green lady just die or...?
I'm pretty sure this gave me cancer but hey we all gotta die of something right?
Honestly I'd say the audio really matched pretty well with this.
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